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Dear Dr. Kyburz,

I just want to thank you for a fantastic year both first semester and second semester. This class has made me thoroughly enjoy writing so much more than I ever have. You have introduced many different new techniques of finding research, summarizing articles and documentaries, using narrative glue, and especially rhetorically analyzing. With using the concept of writing early and revising often helped me earn the grade I desired. I look forward to using the skills that I have developed the past two semesters for my future classes and later in life. Thank you Dr. Kyburz for everything!!

This is my presentation video that depicts how progress has affected me throughout the year. I posted this with my e-Portfolio because I was not sure if I would get the opportunity to present this to my classmates. 

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This image signifies process. Throughout the last two semesters I feel like I have made lots of progess with the projects I created. The project's goal was to find the common view and surprising view of an argument and correlate them. I researched on student-athletes in the collegiate level and whether they should be further compensated for their athletic abilities, or in other words, receive a salary.
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Using this blog over the semester to use my writing skills to tell stories throughout my current life, share my opinion and dicuss certain topics that were important. My favorite blog post was when I dicussed my first solo in an airplane. It was most likely the most exciting moments in my entire life which makes it almost impossible to NOT talk about! I probably sound like a total aviation nerd when I do but I embrace it. Here is a short clip of me landing. 
*Disclaimer, this is actually my second solo*
In conclusion, this year has helped me develop so many talents and perspectives on things also aside from writing. My views on humanity and the world have shifted without a doubt and I am thankful to have taken this course with one of the best teachers at Lewis. Once again, thank you for a great year!

Sincerely,
Tom

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  1. dr. kyburzMay 11, 2018 at 3:52 PM

    Tell the truth: When you land, you totally wanna hollah!!! I'm so proud of you, Tom. You're a brilliant guy, a fabulous writer, and now, a pilot!!! I'm beyond impressed. It's been my great honor to be your teacher :)

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